um?
i quite like the mystique of this production in particular. the reverb does fill the "dead air" so to speak. however, it is only filled with the same thing that has been playing all the way through the song. perhaps fill it with some more harmonious melodies? have strings stabbing in occasionally? add more synths... ones with a pace and rhythm... change the chord sequence once and a while too.
Or not dude. your music not mine. non the less. to give it a more "jolly" feeling, try adding a bounce factor to it. i am submitting a piece tommorow.. 25th/feb. called bounce. it contains a bubbly jolly melody enough to make you vomit. well. chex it out weneva. well. anyhows. what you have is good enough to get my 8! but it doesnt quite have that x factor though, thus the 3/5 vote.
we all start somewhere! keep it up!your almost their!