Hell yeah

The beginning was really sad and mellow, I liked it. The those two chords sounded nicely and the progression was quite simple but rather unexpected, I liked the originality. What's more, I liked how you play a 3th major on a related minor chord - I think you played an A (which is the 3th major of F) on a F minor. It added some tension and increased the originality. I'm glad to see that some musicians are still original :P.

The first distortion riff was kick ass and blown my mind, the guitar tone was sweet and the the riffs that were played on the background sounded nicely. Though, I didn't like the cymbal choke at 1:36, the drum kick is missing there. The other riffs sounded very old school and I liked it, some reminded me of Metallica and some other of Black Sabbath lol.

The clean part near the end was sweet as heck, the bass and the clean guitar fitted each other very well. The delay guitar was beautiful, I remember you told me that you reversed the guitar yourself and then you added delay, it's pretty well done, I would have hardly noticed :P.

The the biggest problem with this song (and your songs in general) are the drums. You are using EZDrummer so they sound like EZDrummer so that's not my problem. My "problem" is that the programming seems to be a bit rough. Let me explain my point. Sometimes some cymbals are missing at the beginning of an important bar, sometime the kick doesn't fit the riff very well - I thinking about the first distorted riff of that song, the riff is very rhythmic and it would have been better to have the same rhythm with the kick, but that's just my opinion x).

As a conclusion I would say it's a pretty kick ass song, I see a lot of effort regarding to composition, the transitions are quite good but need a bit more of work sometimes, the clean parts were excellent and the riffs are always kick ass. Just spend a little bit more time on the drum programming :). Kick ass. 5'd.

Sad...

This sounds like a sad song like a break up song...

Then it just goes to rage and fed up enough of this cruel world with out her i have nothing what is there to live for - suicide medicated confussion death..

Seeing is not believing...

oh on the rage mode the rift sound very close to one my rifts song i made in 2007

The lyrics that 14etan made.

The lyrics that 14etan made actually sound really good with the song. It took me about two times through to sing them properly along with the song, but they really do sound pretty good.

The thing is they don't really last long enough to cover enough of the song. The rest of the song just sounds kind of empty, but it's definitely a good start if you ever do want to add lyrics to this.

The song has a great heavy feel to it and I like how it calms down and picks back up every now and then. Like always an awesome song. Keep up the good work with them.

man this !!!

stared slow and sadly calm and then a good guitar beating

this song just made my day

awwwwwwwww sit man

lyrics ill give it a try

from the the gates of hell open your arms wide
the doom you spelt yourself awakes inside
the burning prison forged from your own hate
swing wide now you accursed unearthly gate

Wait here now now and see
wait here now for your destiny
all the wretched souls you see in dismay
the deliverer now must save

deliver us from these demons
deliver us hear our cries
deliver us from these creetons (idk the spelling)
hear our pain it reaches the skies

swirling pool of agony
tell me were's the unity?
shall we burn here forever
FOREVER AND AN ETERNITY!
good song man my friend compares ur stuff to that of metallica i love most ur stuff this is def some of your best stuff def ad vocals idkare if they are mine or not JUST ADD VOCALS!!!!!!!!!!