I think you should sit down and really explore ways to make your beat a tad more diverse but I really respect this form of Hip Hop so you get a 5.00 from me. And eh if you want pointers just hit me up and Ill help best I can. Keep it coming bro.
thank for the review but i don't think this song really shows my full potential. but it was good practice.
Man, totally detuned.
Could be nice, if it didn't sound so awful. Please, try to get those tones together! (Unless you detuned it on purpose.)