There were a ton of inharmonies in the background that kept annoying me. Pretty cool song there though. Good job!
I think some of the background noise/inharmonies come from two key places in this one:
The guitars I'm using are admittedly poor- the strings are old, they easily fall just a bit out of tune, etc. etc. Plus, I'm just not a good guitar player at all.
Also, I think some of that feel (to my ears anyways) comes with some of the percussion sounds.
Anyway, yeah, definitely a good point. Hopefully with time and practice I'll get better at the mixing process, and maybe even at playing the instruments so that this sort of thing will be much easier to avoid. But I do think at least a little of it comes with the territory when you make noisy music, and it occasionally even adds to the feel of the song. Not, of course, to the extent it's present here, I think.
Thank you very much for the kind words and the review. It's all appreciated, and sorry for the time it took to respond!
Great job dude u have some talent there. Well i couldnt find anything wrong with it so i guess i can tell u the positives:
The guitars in the begining are great and I like how the back rhythm guitar towards 0:48 started to show. I love 1:29 because it slows it down and gets softer then louder and the piano gives it a nice feel to it. The synths added to it make it an extra kick to the music. And I like how the music changes at 3:23 and 3:42.
flawless material. good job! 5/5 10/10
Thank you very much for the overwhelmingly positive review.
Listening to this after some time has passed, it's certainly far from "flawless"- but I really, really appreciate the kind words...they do wonders.
Thank you, and sorry again for the time it took for me to respond to this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.