It feels monotonous.
It could come out to something great, but currently it is bland and a sluggish feel of trance. If that was your perogative, then you hit it on the spot. It felt way longer than 2:54.
that was not my intent but suggestions would be great
Doesn't sound like a lot was put into it...
It seems it was digitally altered, thus taking away the skill it used to create it... but I could be wrong. It sounds like you have a drum machine going also. It repeats quite a bit and uses the same sounds over and over again. I skipped through it after a minute and heard the same thing each time. If this is your talent I'm hearing and not the computers, then I'd say pretty good job : ) I'd like to see the song launch off into another reality and totally blow me away. I could see that happening with a bit more practice though so hang in there.
Gave you a 3 because I wanted to raise your score a little and not dwindle it.
idk exactly what you mean by "the computers" but I made everything myself... and you just got unlucky skipping through you must have missed the build ups