My ears are bleeding a little
#1 It's only 2 loops throughout the whole 4 minutes...
#2 If it's dance, then make your drums about the same volume level as your loop
#3 You obviously have talent but your not showing it whatsoever.
#4 personally I like to see a new track per minute at least, but this was just way to much repetition.
#5 don't quite working/practicing because I can see you making things that would blow us all away.
Gave you a 3 out of 10 and a 1 out of 5, I'd like to see some change...