Wow...
So simple, yet so rich and deep.
The sound you have is so wonderful sir. I love the guitar work...not like...LOVE! Very original and creative throughout the whole song. It seems like there is two lines of guitar going. Is there? Or am I slightly retarded?
If so you did a great job mixing them together for a great sound. If not, then you got an amazing sound on one audio track. Very intricate, but never too complicated. It stay interesting all the way through, and yet is simple enough to appreciate it one the most primary level.
I like the background ambiance that is going on throughout the song. It really adds a layer that is almost undetected, but still gives it color. Not an easy thing to do by any means, and you did it so well here.
I would say add some minor percussion to it. I'm not sure what, but it seems to need something. Maybe just some stick clicks. Like when a drummer hits the edge of the drum, rather than the head itself. Gives that click noise with a slight hint of the drum itself. Just an idea.
5/5 and 9/10 overall. Amazing work here really man! I'm excited to hear your other tracks!
-Gravey-