1) dont tell ppl to not give you 0's cause there is always one ass-hole
at 2:40 - 2:48 thats a good part, but that repetative sound in the back is killin this song ...
take it out and put something else in, its not bad but listenin to it mostly-entire song is ....like puttin your pinky finger in a pencil sharpener and turning it on and off over and over again ...
if you like it then keep it and add it in the song in areas but make it work with the Entire song
Thanks for the advice listener. This was my first experiment with this type of music so i welcome the critic. By the way that thing about the pencil sharpener was pretty funny.