Great song. It had a good melody that was somewhat creepy but also somewhat tranquil. The piano riff (I don't know what else to call it) was very simple, yet had a great effect. The drums coming in also was a great addition to this piece. The only thing I think you could of added was possibly a guitar (or other instrument) coming in shortly after the drums. But, seeing as you're not finished, maybe you will. Overall, great piece, I can't wait to hear the full version.
thanks thats a good idea acutlly heh didnt really think to do that lol