Found this gem while hitting the random button. Amazing!
Awesome concept to write on, boredom! lol
I like how it fades in gradually. Nice little touch to start off. I don't like the drop off after the intro. It feels like it should grow exactly like it does, and then lead right into the song. No breaks, just right into it.
As for the song itself. It is mixed pretty well. I like the lead electric piano sound. I don't use it myself, but it can be cool in the right spots.
I love how you switch to the traditional piano. That is a really cool idea you came up with. It worked really well here too, because this song really fits both sounds well.
I like the percussion sound you have going. Always present, but not overpowering. And you used toms. I'm not used to hearing that in music here on NG. Nice touch. One idea though, maybe put some reverb on the snare. I think it might be a good touch for this song. Normally I hate reverb on drums, but this might be the exception to the rule. The shaker off to the right is badass!
I like the rich full sound you got. A nice flow and generic, yet pleasing chord structure. Vertically I think you did well. But it could be expanded greatly horizontally. Way to short bud. Needs to be much longer. That seems to be my only issue with the song.
4/5 and 9/10 overall. Lengthen it man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.