this is a fun song
I would love to see you add to this as it has a good strat and catchy
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Hello!
This is a simple but jolly song, with a fun little melody, it seems at though it would have singing (i would have sung but my voice is TERRIBLE) and whilst i was making it some lyrics sort of popped in my head, sing a-long if you want ;)
-Jack is a boy from the deep blue sea,
and he sails in a boat for the army,
but he'll be all right,
he'll be okay,
so Jack sail one,
for 1 more day.
REPEAT
Any how i hope you like it and any tips and comments are greatly appreciated,
PIE
PIED3 responds:
I think i will add to it, glad you liked it!
Very good.
I think this was a very good song. The melody and rhthym was very good, and catchy at that. Listening to this did put me in a very jolly mood, and this song really does seem like a famous sing along song or something like that. Good job.
PIED3 responds:
Thank you very much for reviewng! Im glad it put you in a good mood and your reiew has put me in a good mood as well =)
Don't lick concrete
I feel like I opened a can and out poured condensed Pippi-Long Stocking. (A feeling I thought only existed in dreams)
This is a very nice melody and definitely has a sing-a-long kind of feel, its very catchy, but not in an annoying sort of way.
I would recommend making the accompanying piano have some dynamics so it follows the tune a bit more, perhaps soften them.
Also if the silence at the end was trimmed near the end, NG users could make use of this.
Very nice, high five.
PIED3 responds:
Wow, thanks for the review, seeing as ive got such a good response to this i might add to it then i guess! Thanks for reviewing!
xzx
LOL
PIE!!!
Awesome, lol.
JACK IS A BOY!
9.9/10
5/5
CUMBERS!
PIED3 responds:
Lol, thank you for the 10, and i'm glad you liked the song!
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