Pretty Swish
Smooth moving song :)
Wel done :)
5/5
Lyrics:
Well I was kicking it and everything was swell,
and then she had to call and make my life a living hell,
You see everything was fine, maybe even sublime,
But she just ain't gonna let me forget her this time
Whenever I get things right it never fails,
She always comes running to dig her nails(in my back)
Just wants to leave a reminder that I'll never ever be able to have her
Won't let me forget
That what we had was so fine and it'll never happen again
Won't let me forget
Yeah I'm like a dog with a stick on its back chasing the meat
Run run run I need to get away,
All I wanna do is see the light of day,
I'm in a long dark tunnel, sprinting for the end,
and she's always standing there with open hands.
Once I arrive exhausted and sweaty,
I get to watch her speed off in her new Chevy,
and i can hear her laughing as shes driving away
Man I really thought that today was the day
Won't let me forget
That what we had was so fine and it'll never happen again
Won't let me forget
Yeah I'm like a dog with a stick on its back chasing the meat
Won't let me forget
Someone pull the plug on my emotions
Won't let me forget
Cause I'm out swimming circles in the middle of the ocean
Today's the day when I set myself free,
Today's the day when I let myself breathe,
Its OK i've got it in my mind,
That I don't need that girl to have a good time!
Pretty Swish
Smooth moving song :)
Wel done :)
5/5
Very cool
Loved the bass riffs, for sure dude. Excellent recording quality too, everything is top notch. The only thing I can think it would need is some rhythm guitar, it sounds like it's lacking just a little bit. Maybe that's the style that you're going for, but that's just my opinion. 8/10, 4/5.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.