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Uploaded
Feb 16, 2009 | 10:52 PM EST
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
1 min 25 sec
Score
3.10 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
575 Plays | 56 Downloads
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Genres:
Easy Listening - Classical
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Author Comments

A piano solo made for a friend.
Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, as this is my first time doing anything classical.

Reviews


blackattackbitchblackattackbitch

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Sorry for the harsh review

but it just doesn't feel like your song has a clear flow. It just feels really random. It feels like a collection of chords and playing techniques that really don't belong together in the way that they were used. I think the biggest representation of that point is the sudden jump to the lower octave as the finish.

Furthermore, the chord progression choices, while they were varied considerably, which isn't a bad thing in my view, the choices were too all-over-the-place to do this piece any good. It's hard to make a good chord progression choice, but when you do, the piece benefits greatly. Until you do that, it's best to stick with what you know.

Don't hate me, I'm just trying to help you out. If you need help with future pieces, just shoot me a PM and I'll try to share my knowledge with you.


VintageDisko responds:

Not at all man, thanks for the review. As I said first attempt at anything close to this genre, and my knowledge of music in general is quite basic to say the least.
I'm going to attend university next year to study music (and hopefully make some progress) but until then I pretty much just go by whatever sounds good together, or whatever comes to my head.
Would be a great help if you could lend me a hand criticism wise next time i'm in the mood for some piano music.
Have checked out a few of your songs, and quite like.
Thanks