This is pretty cool, great guitar playing, although a few of the licks sound pretty standard, but there are deff sum original bits here and there. A few time issues, but no major train wrecks or anything. The E-D-C-B riff on the bass gets a little repetitive after a while, but is a nice progression to jam to. Good work.
Oh and PS, i don't know everything and I never will, but that won't stop me from trying to learn, I only voted on that one song and I gave you a two because that is what I thought it deserved, and I am voting a 4 on this because it is pretty cool. Actually, I'm pretty sure you voted zero's on all my songs, but that is not a big deal cuz my ng songs are mostly bullshit. I didn't mean to offend when I reviewed your piece; I was just offering constructive criticsm, which is usually a lot more helpful than just saying "THIS SUCKS!!" or "MAN YOU FUCKING ROCK". Anyways, keep playing