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Lost Paradise(fixed Version)

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Author Comments

I noticed that my first Lost Paradise had one part where the sound was off, so I fixed that. Please review and vote. Enjoy!

EDIT: Ok, there was again, a problem in the same place. BUT, I finally got that fixed once and for all. NOW, enjoy!

EDIT: GOOD GRIEF!!!!!! Sorry there was another problem. It seems that I uploaded the wrong song. I have it fixed now.


Sounds good

But the ending was horrible! 1:41 - 1:43
It would be better if u would lower the sound.


DjKanis responds:

Yeah I really don't know what went wrong with the end......Thanks!


I think this melody is very simple, some beats are completely off, it's extremely repetitive, sounds are pretty basic and almost no breaks. Somehow I still am downloading this, I think it's the soul of it, usually I have alot of hard time listening to a song that is not "perfect", but this one got me.

I'd love to see what you will do in 1-2 years, if you keep this kind of soul in your track, which you probably won't while slowly loosing the passion of music, trying to get the perfect sound that none ever reach.

DjKanis responds:

Thanks. I am probably going to do a remastered version of this after my next song. But I really dought in 1-2 years I will have lost all interest because music is my thing. I play piano, and have always loved music. But I guess we will see what happens. So be looking for a new version of this in a few weeks.

Sounds like B0UNCE Style

Sounds like B)UNCE Style music. I really like it. but i think the main tune of the song should be something like the bells at the beginning.

This song should and could be better. again, i really like it, but it needs to be better :) Please upgrade/remaster it or something :)

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DjKanis responds:

Already, I will see what I can do. I already have another song I am planning on doing after this one. I might remaster this one after it that. Oh and by the way, I feel honered that you think it sounds like B0UNC3's style :D

Overall a 3 out of 5

It was pretty good, it was alittle off on a few parts where i just dont think the notes hit at the same time, including your beat. keep practicing though, and make your songs alittle longer.
overall... pretty good

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DjKanis responds:

My songs are usually longer, but this was just a short one :D

EDIT: Ok I got the part where it was off fixed. Now listen.

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Credits & Info


3.76 / 5.00

Feb 16, 2009
2:06 PM EST
File Info
2 MB
1 min 46 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.