You need serious work on this.
One it's really distorted - turn the volume down, or have front and background melody.
Too repetitive - It just repeats and repeats, you need main melody, alternative melody, main beats, and an optional alternative beats.
But the main thing is that you need serious work on the sound.
i do that on purpose, as far as the eq goes. it is intended to sound that way. as far as repetition, you may be correct, but in some cases there really isnt room for a lot of melody. this particular track is ment to be more of an atmosphere thing, you can listen to other songs by me, some will be clear and clean, some will be nasty and unbearable, that is my personality, and also that is life itself, it is not always pretty, it can be brutal and terrible.