Hmmm

This had a very interesting sound to it. It has a pretty good beat and catchy tune. I have to say it has a very original sound to it, but I still would like to see a little bit of variety in it.

Just a couple more sound effects and other noises spread out properly would probably make this sounds a little better. Changing up the main noise a little bit so it wasn't too repetitive would probably help a little bit too.

I think you should have built off of the machine/robot sound that you used more towards the end of the song. Perhaps used it in the beginning of the song, somewhere in the middle, etc.. Not the same exact noise, but more robotic/machine noises.

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Don't stray away.

Well, first, don't make your descriptions like ads for your songs. But this track is whatever. The sounds are annoying. The bass and hit sounds don't feel right, and the kick lacks something. Really, don't stray away from ambient. I know you don't want to.