It really flowed well, really well. I did get kind of bored waiting for the buildup and climax, which I think started at around... 1 minute and 20 seconds, and then it just kind of abruptly stopped... which I don't know if I like or don't like.
You had a good song, though... just maybe take certain unnecessary parts out so we can hear your quick piano work sooner.
Lol I definitely was just trying to learn how to put a song together properly at this stage (this was released almost a year ago XD ). You should check out my newer stuff. I've since learned how to do things properly, and you'd likely enjoy those far more. (After all, this was my first submission to NG)
Thanks for your review, Uninvited642. I'm always glad to get reviews that actually contain some constructive criticism.