It really flowed well, really well. I did get kind of bored waiting for the buildup and climax, which I think started at around... 1 minute and 20 seconds, and then it just kind of abruptly stopped... which I don't know if I like or don't like.
You had a good song, though... just maybe take certain unnecessary parts out so we can hear your quick piano work sooner.
Lol I definitely was just trying to learn how to put a song together properly at this stage (this was released almost a year ago XD ). You should check out my newer stuff. I've since learned how to do things properly, and you'd likely enjoy those far more. (After all, this was my first submission to NG)
Thanks for your review, Uninvited642. I'm always glad to get reviews that actually contain some constructive criticism.
Why is it called puppetry? It's a jazz song... otherwise it's fine.
... I'm not sure why you think "Puppetry" doesn't work with jazz. It's just the name of the song. o _0
Nonetheless, thanks for reviewing.
Dude this really is good, nice song :D
cool rithym equals nice song!!!!!!
very, very, very cool rithym... i wonder how it would sound in a hip-hop style. maybe it would sound more spectacular. best wishes. nice work
Hmm. Hip-hop? I could try that... it might work. o _0
I'm glad you enjoyed this one - you'd probably enjoy "Pseudonym" even more, though.
Thanks for the review, mothafuckus.
could have added more
I won't disagree, I definitely could have added more... I still might do so in the future, too. This being the first full piece I ever released, however, I think it did alright. I'm sure you'd enjoy my more recent releases far more.
Nonetheless, thanks for the review, FizzyCola.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.