all i can say is....

wow..... I was thinking the same thing as the guy under me i too made a little story.. darkness may come... but all will never be lost until we give up hope.. hope will be our guide and hate and saddness will only strenthen us... but never be comsumned by it.... we may experience death.. famine.. pestilence even war... but aslong as we have hope and love in our hearts maybe... just maybe... one of us shall prevail.. ( opening to peasants rebelling to a triant. Leaded by a palladin of course... or maybe for a twist a Dark knight. good ahead and use the idea if you want ive got millions of em).

Touching...

Felt as if all hope had just disappeared with that last rays of sun.
Felt as if nothing was worth was living for........
Felt as if the judgment is upon us all, and that we can only despair.....
But we shall never do so. We must keep up fighting for a better future for us and others.
Let us embrace the horrors that will come when all the rays of sun are gone.
That is what I felt when I listened to this song.
Keep up the great work!

Gorgeous..

The beauty of this piece truly lies in the subtlety of the orchestration and emotion. Everything you wrote fits together so beautifully and the result is a rich, elegant sound that you listen to for hours on end and never get tired of. The dynamic extremes you've presented are very fitting and the hints of melody that are interwoven shine beautifully. I cannot wait to hear the third piece of this suite! Full marks - 10/10, 5/5