Im not a fan of the long melodyless intros, but it was actually really good. I would just say have the melody come in sooner. I was really suprised when it did come in though. REALLY SICK. keep up the good work. I was gonna rate it 11/10 but it won't let me do that. 5/5 10/10. Really nice work dude.
I guess I didn't think about putting the melody sooner, but thats why I linked to the part where it did come in just in case people wanted to skip.
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