good

But i just think that u could of added a bit more in the melody and some more bass everyone loves bass But besides that it kicks major BOOTY

not that powerful

u get me?

I Liked It.

But it wasn't perfect.

The melody was very soothing.

And the bass was at the right volume.

Everything went together.

But it was a bit "Repetitive" to me.

5/5 9/10

<DjT>

Its good, but I've seen it all before.

You have a great arrangement of synths at your disposal, however, your not utilizing the full concept of composing a techno song. I did enjoy it, don't get me wrong, its just that there are a few things you could do for your next piece. For starters, make it longer. A respectably fun techno is, I would say, at least 7 minutes plus, but if you could manage to bust out a 5 minute long techno, that be sweet. And one of the ways you make it longer, and not end up causing a early loop of the main melody, is by making variations. One variation, or even two won't cut it in the long run. You need at least four plus so that it can keep fresh.

Sorry I'm making such a huge review, it's just that a lot of newgrounds techno composers never break the bad habits, leaving a minuscule amount of long, and properly made techno that don't make you want to punch a 13 year old kid. I'm not saying that your a bad artist, I think you have great potential. But don't just submit a song because you had some free time and nothing better to do, submit a song because you put your heart and soul into everything you could possibly do. My friend Zakueast spent almost 3 to 4 months on one techno song. Sure he didn't have the best software, but the composition was great. Transit blast, check it out if you get the chance.

So good luck!

Different

it offers different sounds and make a good combination of cool sounds a definite download to have in your library. 10/10