Trance (demo)

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ello there. another demo. i think this is one of the better things i have made..
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so tell me whatcha think!


Really Good

Is this the same song i reviewed before, or a different one with the same name?

Anyways its a good song i love the FX u used. Melodies were also nice.

5/5 10/10 Keep it up man.

Skylence responds:

its a different song with the same name lol.

when you make that many songs/demos its really hard to get more creative in nameing them lol

Hi Sky

Hi sky,

Since this is a demo I'm only going to give you a short review.

I thought the beginning was great. Really gets me hyped up for what is coming later.

Unfortunately I was a bit disappointed at 1:19. I think you should keep the fuzzy fx going at this part.

For the bass pattern I'm not sure what key your playing in but to make this easier I'll assume your in the C key. Instead of your bass playing C, C, F, F, G,G continuously; alternate with C,C,F,F,G,G,C,C,F,F,E,E. Transpose if your not playing in the c key.

34 seconds needs some backup support. Lead and kick only is kinda empty. Maybe a pad in the background?

49 secs I kinda like this part. Makes me feel happy. I don't think that hardcore kick fits in here too well. Maybe a less hardcore kick in this section.

Hope this helps. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. Can you take a listen to my latest song....seems like that's the only way to get reviews.

Bye for now

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Skylence responds:

thanks for the helpfull review =D

Pretty cool

i liked the intro and the melody.. but work on it some more add new stuff more effects.. better EQing and mastering.. and some reverb or something to the instruments to make it sound more complete.. even a ahrmony lead that follows ur main melody and it will be pretty cool.. another thing is the intro is rly cool with the effect.. but then it just disapears and sounds empty.. you probably know what I'm taklin abuot.. u gotta fill up the song with something so the listener feels that the song actually builds into something rather then the super intense intro u have that leads to "nothing". anyways rly good song one of ur better works. and has potential to be great.

peace and love

Skylence responds:

thanks for listening =D

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4.28 / 5.00

Feb 14, 2009
4:46 PM EST
File Info
1.5 MB
1 min 19 sec

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