Nice! I love slower tempos and dirty sounding instruments. My only complaint is that the drums sound out of place. The other instruments are so grungy, but the drums sound to me like they haven't been equalized at all. In my opinion, they should have a mild taste of distortion, or something to give them a slight dirty feel to them, maybe even compressing them a lot.
The bass is sweet, but I think it could stand to be a little louder, and I don't like how it stopped at 1:14. I know this is a work in progress, just saying to leave the bass in when you finish it. I love the guitar work throughout. That's the kind of style I play around with when I'm jammin with my friends or just playing in my bedroom. Sounds awesome man! Keep it up!