I could picture two or three people Danceing in-sync to this. Even Jumpstyle would work.
biggest problem is that its very boring. try mixing up the pattern or try some soft synths along with the lead like brando said get a bass with some boom to i after the second repetition of the intro melody ad in the bass, dont forget to have a rythm instrument also check out some of my stuff although brando's here is a million times better but either way only look at the 09 stuff or your ears will bleed.
Hey man, nice work you have here. It's good for a start. :D
You need to add a harder kick, something that has bass. Because you've just got a nustyle kick with no umph. Also remember to add snares and hats/crashes/rides in the right places, it makes the extra difference.
Add chords and plucks and such, to give the extra feeling and to strengthen the tension to the chorus.
You inspire me to make a remix. :D
Instead of watching anime, like I have been for the last 2 hours - I'm gonna play with this old tune :D
Good work, keep it up.
wow thanks forthe review, and the tips =]
Im still learning , and these tips are gnna help me ALOT, thank you
ill make sure to watch ur remix when u make it
This will be really good when you finish it :) you just need to finish the drums, bass, and backup :)
ill be working on this for a while, i want to make it really good =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.