So...

The first song I reviewed you told me to listen to your other stuff to hear something more complicated. I'm still searching man.

This stuff really doesn't have much substance. Some random pads, and badly EQ'd drum/instrument hits in random places.

You should at least make the pads have a melody of some sort. They kinda went on and on in a way of their own. Sometimes that is the effect you want, but it is just boring in this instance.

The drums are weak and wimpy. And I'm thinking that "Gonging" sound is supposed to either be the snare, or the replacement for a snare. It is relaly bad. Really really really bad.

Like the other two songs I heard, this needs to be washed clean and started completely anew. Find a melody, and make some harmonies. At least make something with a thought process to it. This just sounds like you randomly threw sounds together in various patterns.

1/5 and 1/10 overall, because this is simply bad.

Good luck on future projects man.

-Gravey-

I kinda like it....

but it's like hearing two different songs. The melody and the drums simply do not mix in this one.