it's not great but not terrible. it does need some more of a beat though. and the lead instrument sounds a little bad to be honest. sorry but this could use work.
Really it was a good attempt but to be honest the melody and backing were both pretty bland. I like the kick bass, but the organs really don't fit.
Good try though...
first of the ending just sucked. it sounded like lots of garbage. i do not like the sounds you used. they do not work well together. the drums need a lot more and they need eq. the synth sound needs lots of work. it sounds lke you just put on notes, did you work with a chord progression at all. also master the track once you complete it
also did you play any of the intruments/sounds or was this all computer generated (i ask everyone)
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