It hurts kinda good
The major issue for me was the cracking voice, it kinda hurt my ears. However, I like what you have, the chord progression was good and I like your voice selections. Really though, the crackling sound did hurt. I don't use or know to use FL but figure out how to get rid of the crackling and you'll have a really good tune. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the input! Ya, I'm new with advanced effects, and the dumb crackle is coming from the reverb for some reason... I'll remove that for the final release. :)