I agree with those two

read the summery

I really dig the song

Aside from FLSlayer, I do enjoy this song. One thing I would recomend though for future reference is the use of cymbals that sustain longer, and putting them on the downbeat of every few measures. Other than that I really enjoyed this song! Thumbs up to you!

Melodies!

Loving the pads off the bat! Such an epic feel.

Oh no, that synth is just stabbing at the ambiance of the song. Try lowering the volume on it a bit and maybe adding a bit of a reverb and delay on it. The synths make it sound a little like a old game without any effects on it.

It just sounds a little empty.

I can absolutely see the potential in here, just polish up on your skills a bit. I can see that melodies come to you no problem, but making the melody is only an eighth of what you need to do.

Don't take this as negative. Its constructive criticism. I'm just being honest. If everyone said, "Hey! That's bad ass dude!" You wouldn't know what you'd need to work on.

Anyways. I hope you expand upon this song. I'd like to hear what it could come out to sound like.

Check me out sometime.
i2 (Paul)

(p.s. not really feelin' the electric guitar, if you want that dirty raspy sound, try going for a saw-ish pad)