Honestly mang, its not the worst thing Ive heard. Your stuff in general, is pretty good. I'd personally like to hear more original loops and stuff... but.
This song isnt all so bad. Personally, I would of liked more melodic rhythm.
Keep up the good work...and whenever you feel like the music you make sucks, just take a look at some of the top listened songs for the week-- some of them, are just retards putting in random notes into FLS with no clue what they're doing. As long as you're making your own shit, or atleast modifying what you're making...then power to you.