niiiiiiiice. but your voice it a bit cracked.
do i have permission to re-record this song, me singing over? because that would be so cool.... i'd send you a link. anyway i won't do it if you say i can't. but i would love to do that.
anyway, if this is your first vocal peice my advice is to stick to it. was this all one take by the way? i mean did you sing from the begining to end? because when i record mysdelf or others singing, i do each verse seperatley. it prevents you from running out of breath like i think you did about 2 mins in. just a suggustion.
i'll be blunt, you aren't the best singer ever. but this somehow works perfectly. this song is SOOO on my ipod. already.
the lyrics are poetry, the entire thing is beautiful. i love it. and here i thought you were just amazing at techno. :)