But the strings should overlap a little. Because their is a ever so slight moment where you can hear a click, because one swell ends right before the other begins.
Other than that nifty job here. I can't really think of a wait to improve it. I would have to know the scene in the movie to decide whether or not you should change it structurally.
4/5 and 9/10 overall.
Yeah_I like it. Could use this in a david lynch movie...
i think you nailed the suspense
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.