Nice n mellow...yea

Im likin the sound that you are trying to create but the song seemes to have a few edges primarily i beleive in the arpeggio that you used. Seems out of beat and too clunky at some points. Overall nice, the deep mellow bass is nice. I beleive you could have worked on this more.

Good job

This was good. good job.

Congratz man!

Congratulations on your top5 spot this week :) I think the tune was nice and mellow, the only thing I didn't really like were the drums... They were kinda weak :|

But, for one of your first real songs, it's quite good :) Good luck on future projects :)

Greetz,
DJ Runaway
UAPPC
(Unofficial Audio Portal Protection Crew)

this is chilled out...

... like u said. And i really like it, its just that them drums feels like space invaders. Mixing in other music styles can be very interesting, but here them drums were just totally wrong.
A descent techno/trance or even chilled hip-hop beat could have been a good thing in this song, i think.

Good job on everything accept the drums though. Theres really potential in this song!

/Rucklo

really like the chilled arp....

...but i'm not so keen on the drums, they need to be more electronic to be in keeping with the lush ambient arp sound. The bass is nice and rounded and the whole tune is nice and smooth. Good stuff.