PRETTY SWEET

Wow! I loved it! Sounds really cool! But the beginning with the drums didn't seem to fit.

great song

you says you need to make them dark, they are divine as they are ^^

Excellent varying rhythms within the song.

The first 10 seconds don't sound dark at all, in my opinion, but it does give the song some time to start off and actually sounded less bright each time it replayed. So 5 seconds later, it starts to get a little less major in terms of mood. I like that; another sign of good progression.

I don't think the violins quite fit with the song, though. If it were a different instrument..or some nice synth...I think it would be interesting to hear. The way the violins were playing though, is perfect. Like that same slow, graceful bowing. So that kind of sound technique, but minus the violin.
I really do like, however, this one synth's entrance. It came pizzing through quietly around 0:38. It sounded very nice and added to the mix with a tasty flavour :D! It does get a bit loud when it hits the low notes 10 seconds later, though. Too bassy compared to everything else. And my speakers were
treble > bass =o
The piano with the drums sounded good together, naturally. And again, you have a fitting beat that doesn't disappoint. Plus, I really like the end of the song! The snares finished it short and satisfyingly.

I think it would be a very good ending theme, this composition. Or kind of a first-thing intro, with the beginning beat playing as the primary credits are shown.
This is the short kind of piece that would cry and wither to bits if not used in a visual presentation of some sort! :'(

Holy Crap, I was about to make a song.....

For the same game lol

Yeah it's a little too bright, and I would suggest using more synth as opposed to acoustic instruments in regards to that game.

It's really hard to make a good chord choice, but if one does make a good chord choice, it really pays off.

Nice melody though, I really like it. The entrance of the pizzicato (I'm assuming that's what it was) was really creative and very surprising.

Nice job. I would write more, but I realize I better make a song for that game as soon as possible before the spot fills up. Peace!