Lmao

Sounds like another version to my track >.> .. I'm giving u an 8 cause the melo seemed a bit out of tune at like the beginning and the instruments weren't great to be honest... Good job though, I hope to see more from you in the future..

Review

Hi Sky,

Well I wrote a review to this song already, but before I submitted it I lost power to my house. This song is short so I'll make some short review again.

So I noticed that this song loops actually pretty well. I'm not a big fan of the instruments you used. It doesn't fit the club theme too well. I don't know how you make your instruments, but you might have to intensify the lower frequencies to give the nice club feel. Kinda like what you did at 42 seconds. Only you now need a lead to accompany that bass.

1:08 your transition is not smooth. Maybe a fade in might have been smoother. Lastly, at 1:22 when that dark bass comes back.....it doesn't seem to fit well. Kinda messy sounding and the contrast from your happy lead sound with that darkish bass don't mix together.

I didn't hear any clipping and all instruments were pretty audible. I think you should stick to one mood throughout the entire song especially for club music. Eg. If your going for hardcore mean kind of style, don't mix it with happy nonhardcore stuff.

Overall, I'll give you a 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.
Bye for now

not half bad

if u tuen in ur skills more u might have soemthing here
ill be wating to hear more from u
keep up the good work

zero