Maybe some more variety...
Sounds very evil and dissonant, but alot more can be done - If you plan on making it into a full blown song, you could progessivly increase the speed on the string melody and change some of the intervals to keep the listeners ears in check... and then throw in something else in another voice thats in the same scale (Bbm I think... or Cm with diminished 2nd)... and more tubular bells! (haha I think thats what I hear) Other than that nice work.
Thanks, maybe ill see what I can do with it and post it again (lol, that would be my third evil anthem :P)
A bit generic
But it makes a good loop. Kinda sounds like a B-side from a 16-bit Final Fantasy soundtrack. Good synth use, the melody sounded nice. The tolling bell was too loud in my opinion, would have liked it better if it was quieter and less frequent. For the file size and lenght, its was really only one small loop with a break down ending though. It could have been shorter. Not bad at all I would say.