since i'm not good into this genre i can''t give u any advices .. i'll try still .. ;D .. i like the melody very much! there's something.. asian about it.. it's very good too! i really liked it ! ur best so far!
And as always ur drumbeats is very good! actually the only thing it needs.. is a better ending.. it feels like.. it needs a very big ending.. and then this could be a serious smashhit!
ALMOST! PERFECT my friend.
very good job on this! VERY close to a fav. make the ending better and pm me if u do it ;]
Keep it up.