Good but you should make some parts much softer then others. This sounds flat otherwise....either way this is well composed...
I think I will have to keep an eye on you just in case.
oh and hey, check this out...http://www.newgrounds.com/audio /listen/211628...don't mean to impose a song on you in a review, but I enjoy your songs enough that I would like a review or two from you ^^.
ive been playing this on paino for a whil now, and this sounds better than me :P