Interesting...

It has a very nifty feel to it when the "music" actually kicks in.

The intro gets to be a bit much, but it is not unbearable.

I think that this could definitely be expanded vertically. More instruments should definitely be added. You also would benefit from some harmonies. That would give the song a lot more color, and a rich, fuller sound.

I do like how you brought the "noise" back in halfway through for a section. And the it dropped back out when the one melody line kicked back in. That was actually a pretty good effect.

From your comment above it seems like you weren't really trying to come up with a masterpiece here. But I still think you could have done more with it.

2/5 and 3/10 overall. Not a bad start, but you should definitely keep working on it. I hear potential.

-Gravey-

this stuff is wack, yo.

this song is a tad annoying. i do like the effects, very good. are they sampled from powerstrike? lol. the bass and melody join up alot though, maybe the bass could play something else. the best thing about this is the beat. well balanced and nice sounding but annoyingly looped.
I like the ending. very weird lol.
thanks. :D