Vocals better than music
I think the vocals are the best part. The music is fairly un-spectacular, but the vocals have a unique quality to them. Keep writing, singing and recording, you'll have great success.
That people really focus on the vocals on most songs. People want to hear the perfect singer. Your voice is fine here and don't listen to what anyone says about it killing the song. This song is great and should be treated as such.
The guitar is nice too. I've always been a sucker for the acoustic :)
glad you liked it. im no singer, but hey im hiting the same notes everyone else does...haha. ive also noticed people are way too critical of free content.
Alright well. The chord progression is fine. But the vocals... really... Kill it.
at least i can use it to get a message across