Well, here's the remastered version of Chaos pt.1: Sea of Destruction. Took me a few hours because I didn't remember what I had written in some parts (I wrote the original on the demo version of Fl Studio so I couldn't save it). Several changes, especially in the drums and instrument choices for the synths, but all for the better.
All reviews are welcome, and please vote damnit! :D
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Woahhhh, your really talented man! I heard something about you writing this first on the demo? Is this only your first submissions/songs? If so, keep going you could be reallllly talented!
You only missed out on the last star because of a few weird transitions here or there - specially the one at the start from the soft slow music to the hard drum beats, and also around 2:30-3 i found there was a few odd notes.
Thanks! Uhh, well no lol. I've submitted several tracks, some generating success, others not so much : / But yeah. I've been kind of in a weird toss between writing industrial music, and writing metal. I originally wrote this one on the demo yeah. It's posted on here actually if you want to compare. Titled Chaos pt. 1: Sea of Destruction.
I understand what you're saying about the transitions. It's mainly due to the instruments I chose I think (I'm most likely going to take the Digi synth in the background out in the section you mentioned. I wanted something to kind of build up, but I see it's not working), but I know there are parts that could definitely be worked on more. The drum transition from the slow to the heavier section is definitely one of those.
Thanks again man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
HarvestThrone 
