I like this
Its not exactly funk all the way through, but it is very funky, the intro did put me off at first it was a bit basic and the sound was kinda cheesy, but it grew on me for some reason, with a bit of processing and improving on the actual sounds u used, i can see this being quite a good track actually
when i first made it i didnt think it was that good, then i went back and listened to it, and it has a really basic sound to it, and it actually sounded pretty nice so i submitted it.
I really like the melody in this peice, but your drums arent very..."interesting" maybe work on them a little bit. I may be too harsh on you I guess, because I'm a drummer and like drum beats...but you never know. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.