It Needs Something
The song is hard to make into a SONG, because the original is only...what...like 45 sec. long?
But that aside, I felt there needed to be a defined beat. There was that ominous...ambiance...in the background, but that's not really the same. I like the idea of a flowing song (especially since this piece was made with the water element in mind), but it felt a little lacking. You did do well to get the melody down correctly.
Erm. Quick note, its good.
First, I think you mean LoZ instead of ToZ... Just a note.
Second, it sounds like a loop with changing background music.
Just offering feedback, but maybe you could change up the main sequence of it, make some parts faster, slower, different tone, etc. and then also change around the bgm.
thank for the feed back ill take note of that to make it better
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.