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uhh its sumthin. good bass i guess lol sry its .mp3 sum reason i cant submit .wav

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Nice little loop...

I have to say, its an interesting loop. Good drum beat and everything. The only problem is, your bass is too low, and when your repeat, the bass needs to get stronger, not weaker.

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

not really it kinda sucks ass, it was posted for the hell of it, like a failed experiment.

not my thang

trying to nutt my own preference for music out of the equation, well the drum beat clips badly, theres no bass line, and the melody sounds a little feeble. well, maybe i shouldnt be hard on it sounds like it was made using FL (not the best program ever) i dont know if you should improve this, is it worth it? if u think it is, cut the volume on the bass drum and possibly the snare, add some counter melodies and a gritty bass perhaps, and make the current note progression kick some more ass by lengthening the notes, adding another sound to it, giving it a little more frequency range....hope this helped a bit!

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

well it wasnt bad in my eyes, but neiterwas it good, it was jus fucking around, PLEASE dont listen to this and then think my music sucks, listen to the striker, and Armageddeon remix (they are my favs that i made)

Well, first of all...

Switch this review with the one I did of Armageddon. I accidently put the review for this song on that review, and vice versa.

As for Armageddon, the song this review is for cause i'm an idiot who can't br bothered to look before clicking, its technically really good. Love the chaotic beats and piano synths in it. Reminds me of a crazy factory where a pianist has invaded. Just that fade out in the middle of the song was jarring. Actually wasn't really a fade, it just stopped then faded back in. Would have been better without it. The guitar synths were a great ender though. The song comes off as being very powerful. Everything had its place almost. Good beat and drums. Just take out that fade, that kept this song from really connecting with me. Its like this and the other track i reviewed are great, but they have certain flaws that hold them back. Which sucks cause your style is really good. Oh well, still good, but not great like it could be.

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

its amazing how one of the shittiest songs ive made gets more feedback than the best ones if made, now like 30 ppl think i suck ass and prolly wont even chek out my new stuff......

Wow...this really bites

I'm praying that the .wav format would be better. The bass sounds like some nut pounding on something. It's no bass drum. The guitar is way too distorted too. This is pretty simple and slow too. Keep tryin'

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

it was jus fucking aroun, don say keep trying like im a noob lol.

plus u mus hav some really bad speakers or sumptin, either that or don appreciate hard bass.

on my headphones its really nice bass.

but it wasnt an attempt at something really good, it was jus a pleasurable sound.

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Mar 8, 2005
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