Im sorry

Im sorry yo! its not the best but i still like it!

holy crap....

Dude... this song is so freaking awesome. The beat, the sounds, it's crazy. It tells a story to. Weird.

Keep it coming dude...

Made me look at your page

Was good enuf to make me look at your page

Nice

Nice job man, sounds pretty good.

Good Things:
-Nice string usage.
-Interesting breathing effect, haha.
-Liked the string pluck kinda melody.
-Nice gun cocking noises. Could've been placed a bit better though in the song in my opinion.
-Cool intro.

Bad Things:
-Faint "whats" in the background were kind of unnecessary. Very overused as well.
-Instead of having that synth I would have preferred some good ole' strong brass backing up the string melodies. And for all I know the synth might've been brass, but even if it was it didn't sound nearly convincing enough.
-When you had those claps, they should've been a lot louder.
-Hip-hop style snare just doesn't suit me at all. But as most people know, it's a personal preference and I understand most hip-hop songs demand it's use unfortunately.
-Timpani hits near the end should've packed a lot more punch.
-Song need a lot more in general, sounded kinda empty. Maybe some choir?

Nice song man, keep em' coming. 5/5, peace.

Sick ass beat. :P

Your music is amazing dude. VERY hip-hop[ish]. And that's what it's all about. Nothing to complain about this one either! So I'ma add to Favorites. :D Also adding you to Favorites to see your upcoming songs. :) BTW... it ended great, too!