i will give you a break too. and vote 10. and 5/5. this is because you are new and need some support. however, I must emphasise you take in and fully absorb all the information that the reviewer below (mkie nedachi) has said. Newgrounds people are very responsive, in a bad way. They say what they think. and they WONT be gentle. post music that you are SURE is worth the time of someone listening too. If you are not sure about a song. Dont post it. Ask someone else on NG to listen to it privately. then ask them for how to improve.
I myself am a musician too. and i understand basic musical structure, harmonics and melodics. though you have no idea what they are, you should find out. As you dont just need to understand your FL studios, to make good music. You need ot understand music itself.
please PM me for any info you may need. :D
P.S. your music needs improvement.
it has several riffs playing out of key to eachother, and clashes.
I do like the beat though.
Try adding more DIFFERENT things to it.
whether they be instruments, NEW riffs or a new rhythm.
Well done on your first try. and look after your self here.