i will give you a break too. and vote 10. and 5/5. this is because you are new and need some support. however, I must emphasise you take in and fully absorb all the information that the reviewer below (mkie nedachi) has said. Newgrounds people are very responsive, in a bad way. They say what they think. and they WONT be gentle. post music that you are SURE is worth the time of someone listening too. If you are not sure about a song. Dont post it. Ask someone else on NG to listen to it privately. then ask them for how to improve.
I myself am a musician too. and i understand basic musical structure, harmonics and melodics. though you have no idea what they are, you should find out. As you dont just need to understand your FL studios, to make good music. You need ot understand music itself.
please PM me for any info you may need. :D
P.S. your music needs improvement.
it has several riffs playing out of key to eachother, and clashes.
I do like the beat though.
Try adding more DIFFERENT things to it.
whether they be instruments, NEW riffs or a new rhythm.
Well done on your first try. and look after your self here.
Will do it, too! :D
Welcome to newgrounds buddy!
I'm goin to be honest & be respectful to your peice, your new to producing/making tunes & such so im going to tell you a few things you need to no which can be quite useful!
1) Practice & listen to other peoples work as much as possible to get the feel of structure in music & songs
2) More practice and read tutorials on FL Studio as much as you can, if your not sure what your looking at, read everything & soon, it will make sense to you.
3) Think about your notes in melody & remember less is more in my opinion.
4) Try not to post anything you think sounds good without asking for honest opinions from friends or family & tell them straight to be honest.
Because you dont want a huge smile when your submitting your work then some arsehole like 10% of newgrounds users are, sending "hope you die whilst posting your next audio & other related things.
Im self taught & did'nt read anything at all, im 17 made drum & bass for 3 years, still dont no what im doing, but i no how to work synthesizers, make reece & other stuff.
My Opinion On Yoru Tune:
Your tune is very erm, strange dont take that a bad way, strange is unique, but what genre is it ment to be? You have like a Dub-Electro sounding intro and then drums everywere. for your first tune i'd say bloody good job.
Most peoples first tune is just loud noise splattering out of the master channel, but yours is just fine, not much bad to say about your first song/tune.
just bare in mind my 4 things & if you would like a honest opinion before submitting, i'd love to help you out and send you some more reviews on your work, you wont find many nice people on here, there up there own backside & very smug about there Audios & Animations.
(Private Mail Me If You Would Like Some More Advice & I'll Get Back To You.)
5/5 <--- Voting Score
10/10 <--- Rating Score
Thanks, will do on later future, but first, i should really practice and learn :D