Umm sounds like demented birds
Well the part a 50 seconds is great you should have done more of that stuff
Yeah, the song is too long and too repetitive... Try to work more on your style, and you should do smaller musics... 0:52 to 1:53 was the best part, it's basic but I enjoyed it.
It's was sometimes good, but boring.
2/5 & 4/10
Smaller musics eh? Okay I'll work on that.