It can't be your first, no way in hell. Way too good for that.
awsome stuff U R A GENIUS
Gah, I'm too under-leveled to be fighting this...
...but I'm determined to win, no matter what! Anyways, yes this could very well be used as the final battle in an rpg. Good job.
J00 get 5/5 and 9/10 from me.
HOLY MOLY AM I PLAYING AN RPG?! oh NO IM ABOUT TO DIE!!! ......dAMN... gota start all over.
This got style^^
I like this, got a nice RPG touch all over it.
Good job =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.