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[R.22].My Separate Lives.

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It really is gettin' a bit stressful living back home since I have no where elseto live. This whole house is full of dope smoking teens all day every day. At any given point there's 10 people here all stoned beyond belief. I just miss the home this place used to be I guess.

Thanks to nietzlawe for the beat

Livin' here... It's just getting' so hard
I can't even hear myself think anymore
In the middle of all this crazy shit.
Sometimes I wonder why this is all happening to me
But I'm determined to pull myself outta here...
No matter what it takes.

Chorus

So when we...
Try and stop all the ways that we live
Do we...?
Stop for casual shit talkin' kids
Can we...
Plot another way without raisin' glocks
And then...
Start thinkin' about our time on the clock
So when...?
Can the system finally be cleansed
So then...
Could we be destined to defense
Defend...
This broken world at its end...
Defend...

Verse 1

So I walk in the door I aint talkin' no more
So the clock is tic tocin' as I'm layin' on the floor
Go and pick a toxin' poppers poppin' when you are bored
Pain stoppin' mental blocks what do I do this shit for

Never stoppin' never plottin' how they gonna get outta this
When they're better parts of their esophagus is covered in shit
Just to switch up the weather forecast within their owns heads
So it's just the way I said so I'll just go right ahead and call it the end

My brain has called it quits yo I'm done with givin' in
I'm gonna go out and see what living really is
And maybe one day I'll be fit to raise some kids
So my sight's set on paths to obtaining all of this

But it's hard sustaining paces when I'm running in this race
'Cus my heart just starts shakin' and breaks my mental state
So sentimental knowin' that I must have been Heaven sent so...

Chorus
So when we...
Try and stop all the ways that we live
Do we...?
Stop for casual shit talkin' kids
Can we...
Plot another way without raisin' glocks
And then...
Start thinkin' about our time on the clock
So when...?
Can the system finally be cleansed
So then...
Could we be destined to defense
Defend...
This broken world at its end...
Defend...

Family tragedy had to be grabbing me stabbing at me
Until I can't breath. Laughing so sadly just badly jabbing at me
Crawling on my knees as I plead to reverse what's happened to me
And write my destiny, but it's best to be what I'm trusted to be

And I'm glad to be who I'd hoped I would be so please
Back up cut off from society this is my main propriety
So ya think I'm lying this time through these nickels
And these dimes wit fly rhymes well I guess that's fine

But never get in front of what is destined to be mine
And whether this will test me to my limits I will climb
Up to Heaven with a rope made of entwined vines
Second chances are hard to find practically divine

So up out this place I will make my own way
I will take my own days that the system took away
And leave all of this where it fuckin lays

Chorus
So when we...
Try and stop all the ways that we live
Do we...?
Stop for casual shit talkin' kids
Can we...
Plot another way without raisin' glocks
And then...
Start thinkin' about our time on the clock
So when...?
Can the system finally be cleansed
So then...
Could we be destined to defense
Defend...
This broken world at its end...
Defend...

Try and stop all the ways that we live
Defend...
Stoppin' for casual shit talkin' kids
Defend...
Plot another way without raisin' glocks
Defend...
Can we justify the means to the end on a clock
Defend...
Can these systems mission finally be cleansed
Defend...
When we're givin' destined direction to defend
Defend...
And mend the broken stems of a world at its end...
Defend...
Defend...
Defend...

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good ish

yo i really like dis track...u got a nice rhyme scheme...theres a couple things i could point out that you could work on..nothin major...like emotion is really the biggest thing...u got it...but i feel it could be more intense....the hook was tight thats what got me interested in the track....the effect was coo at times i couldnt totally understand..it is sorta late at the moment so im not tryin to make too much noise in these damn apartments...lol...so it could just be that..but def over all i gave u a 9 instead of a 10 cuz of those things i listed...keep doin u man..maybe we can jump ona track together sometime

RoobyKillAll responds:

Yeh there's always room for improvement. I'm definitely going to try and pump out more emotion in my next tracks. I'd love to pound down a track with ya sometime man. Your shit's fuckin' dope. lol thanks for the review brah.

yo son

you stepped the fuck up. i like the hook. but about that hook.. when you harmonized the hook and you came in "Try and stop all the ways that we live"..etc. I say you could've came on abit more gentle on that part. And did you double yourself on the hook? (sounds like it). cuz if you did.. your double sounds a tab bit off at some points. Other than that, your getting better. nuff said

-RMP

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks a lot man. Really appreciate it. Yeah I'm gonna fix up the chorus a bit when I borrow my friend's laptop. Been told about the chorus problem already lol.
Like ya said man, 2009's the year for the real folk to step up over the fake shit. Thanks again.

i like it

you can tell it is getting to you just by hearing the way you spit it. hope it gets easier for ya man.
5'd
-tea

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks a lot man. And yeah it really is. Luckily I've got vacational rights to my girlfriend who lives a few hours away. Glad you liked it.

Sup.

Really love this one. Yes, love. Don't know why but I never noticed the title of this track when I first checked it out yesterday. Fits it quite perfectly.

And lol @ you for even thinking of getting me to sing over this.

RoobyKillAll responds:

Hey you were the one who wanted to work on a track with me :P Thanks a lot hun. You know I always try and put out tracks to your standard of listening. Glad I could float your boat again.

wicket

hit me up if your down to do a colab hit me up on yahoo miztah_j@yahoo.com track is wicket as fuck aint nothing i can suggest to make it better

RoobyKillAll responds:

Thanks a lot dude. I'll definitely give ya a looksie for collab time.

Credits & Info


Listens
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Downloads
74
Votes
9
Score
4.78 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 6, 2009
6:13 PM EST
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
4 min 18 sec

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