This song is actually kinda good.
I actually like your melody here. It doesn't sound random and dissonent like you other songs. Good job XD. Tobad this is your only good song. All your others suck :3
1 song wich has potential kilakan gj,
--but... the drums are very very lame..and after 1:10 till ending it just sucks. --
but the guitar-like sound is very nice, (my advice) take this style, and keep making music like this.
i would like you, to really really hear your own music objectively, its the only way to improve in music, i swear. and use only the critisism u understand and work on those area's.
your probably a 12 year old little dude, and i bet your mom is very proud you can make some music at all, but try to study some songs you like, and try to copy them, i promise you will learn a great deal from it.
really.... im not here to bash you, i only tell truth.
(and btw my music sucks too, im not happy about it at all)