While playing around with LMMS (I know, how OpenSource xD) I happened to make my first piece of music that actually played like a song and not a monotonous loop. It really takes until 0:30 to start and 1:00 to kick off, but I am so proud of it.

I've put it up because I really want comments on how to make my music 'proper ace' and would like to know what I do well and what I do... not so well. Plus, I would like someone to confirm this is the right genre.